Nicely done. Though i'd have a few suggestions about it, first, I'd extend the dress further down so its longer, or have feet showing - those help. Also just as a tip when using photoshop to color, i'd recommend a gradual progression to shade by using layers or multiply - like the shading along her right side seems to just disapear 2/3 the way down her side.

Or maybe this is the right coloring/shading style since it's done in anime-like- i dunno.

Have differences in line width and such to show variations in closeness.

A good start - keep the work up and always thing about consistant lighting and how it affects everything on the body seeing as that always makes a picture look better.

Enough of a critique for me today - cheers and good luck.

So sweet...nice drawing Looks good for starting out...keep it up!

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Beautiful! It bring tears to my heart... eyes!

thanks i really like this one

Aww, so pretty! I like this a lot. Simple colouring is very effective, as are the cute little feathers (did you do them all or just add them in with the program?),

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thanks so much! they were on Illustrator, i found it kinda hard to put it on there, for as long as i have been using Illustrator... i still have no idea what i'm doing sometimes lol

Nice! nice!!

thanks

This is beautiful. So sweet! she seems kind of sad and yet hopeful, a truly beautiful creation and i love the movement...this is really nice work!